Constriction

Posted on March 13, 2019 by Sue Vincent

Hard
Edges
Cage imposed
Limiting form
Counting syllables
Seeking conformity
Obedient to dictates
Narrowing the field of vision
To engender uniformity
The bias of judgement obeys its rules
Railing against apparent constriction
Forgetting existence is defined
Necessary separation
Failing to understand
Freedom’s illusion
Made possible
By edges
Being
Hard

Double etheree for Colleen’s poetry challenge

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About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent was a Yorkshire born writer, esoteric teacher and a Director of The Silent Eye. She was immersed in the Mysteries all her life. Sue maintained a popular blog and is co-author of The Mystical Hexagram with Dr G.M.Vasey. Sue lived in Buckinghamshire, having been stranded there due to an accident with a blindfold, a pin and a map. She had a lasting love-affair with the landscape of Albion, the hidden country of the heart. Sue  passed into spirit at the end of March 2021.
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20 Responses to Constriction

  1. Ennle Madresan's avatar Ennle Madresan says:
    March 13, 2019 at 07:11

    Remarkable!!

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  3. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes's avatar jenanita01 says:
    March 13, 2019 at 09:53

    Splendiferous, Sue!

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  4. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:
    March 13, 2019 at 14:12

    I love the close on this. Beautifully penned, Sue.

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  5. memadtwo's avatar memadtwo says:
    March 13, 2019 at 15:29

    Limits can often be more freeing than the undefined. (K)

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  6. willowdot21's avatar willowdot21 says:
    March 13, 2019 at 17:15

    So very clever Sue 💜

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  7. Widdershins's avatar Widdershins says:
    March 13, 2019 at 22:48

    Oh, I see, you increase/decrease the syllables on each line … very cool! 😀

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  8. Colleen Chesebro's avatar Colleen Chesebro says:
    March 16, 2019 at 01:06

    I love the path forward in your image. Kerfe said it best: “Limits can often be more freeing than the undefined.” So true. ❤

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  9. Vashti Q's avatar Vashti Q says:
    March 19, 2019 at 01:33

    Hi Sue! I love your double Etheree. Just gorgeous and powerful. 🙂

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