
Image shared courtesy of Aishwarya at Kitty’s Verses for Colleen’s Poetry Challenge
Strait
The path
Narrow lines
Guiding onwards
Shrouded and shadowed
Both beauty and respite
Call a seeker’s feet to stray
Till drawn by darker temptations
The light ignored for baser nature
The track seems lost in a jungle of need
Wayward spirits seek the path of return
Peering through the self-created gloom
In search of a light that seems lost
Until turning deep within
They find a guiding star
Present, quiescent
Lighting the way
Never lost
Leading
Home



























A beautiful poem and truth of life
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Thank you 🙏
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You’re welcome 😉
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Self – created gloom and in search of light that seems lost, beautiful expressions, Sue. Lovely. 🙂
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Thank you, Aishwarya 🙂
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You are welcome, Sue. 🙂
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This is terrific Sue!
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Thanks, Di.
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you’re welcome
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Fabulous response, Sue. Love how you’re helping us find the light.
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Thank you, Lisa.
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Love this Sue ❤️
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Thanks, Willow ❤
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💜
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I love your comparison and contrasts, Sue. Your words are the journey toward the light. Brilliant! ❤
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Thanks, Colleen. We never truly leave the path… only lose our way sometimes.
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So true… ❤
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Awesome poem Sue. Take us to the light!
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This is amazing Sue. Very well balanced
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Wonderful Sue…the track of life with some sidings on the way…but always moving forward. x
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger for all Genres as well as craft books and commented:
nice!
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A wonderful reminder to look within for your answers and light. Beautiful.
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Thank you.
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