Hundred #writeinspiration

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She pulls dull, sagging skin into an approximation of a face-lift. It will need more than surgery. In their two years together she feels she has aged a hundred. Dreams and white lace hang loosely on her bones. She can hear him snoring in alcoholic stupor. At least the knife is sharp.

For Sacha Black’s 52 word challenge

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About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent was a Yorkshire born writer, esoteric teacher and a Director of The Silent Eye. She was immersed in the Mysteries all her life. Sue maintained a popular blog and is co-author of The Mystical Hexagram with Dr G.M.Vasey. Sue lived in Buckinghamshire, having been stranded there due to an accident with a blindfold, a pin and a map. She had a lasting love-affair with the landscape of Albion, the hidden country of the heart. Sue  passed into spirit at the end of March 2021.
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19 Responses to Hundred #writeinspiration

  1. Complete scene completely described. Really good!

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  2. So much there in so few words. Good one.

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  3. kirizar's avatar kirizar says:

    Fifty shades of Lorena Bobbit?

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  4. KL Caley's avatar KL Caley says:

    Ooooh how intriguing! I don’t know if I dare say I know how she feels regarding the snoring – haha – even the dog snores in this house! Very creative Sue, loved it! KL 🙂

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  5. Ritu's avatar Ritu says:

    Oooh! A little chilling me thinks!!!

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  6. Um…wow. This is beautifully dark. I love it.

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  7. HaHA! I loved this Sue. Disillusioned and ready to kill him! 🙂

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  8. noelleg44's avatar noelleg44 says:

    Wow, Sue! The mind of a killer!

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