Hundred #writeinspiration

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She pulls dull, sagging skin into an approximation of a face-lift. It will need more than surgery. In their two years together she feels she has aged a hundred. Dreams and white lace hang loosely on her bones. She can hear him snoring in alcoholic stupor. At least the knife is sharp.

For Sacha Black’s 52 word challenge

About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent is a Yorkshire-born writer and one of the Directors of The Silent Eye, a modern Mystery School. She has written a number of books, both alone and with Stuart France, exploring ancient myths, the mysterious landscape of Albion and the inner journey of the soul. She is owned by a small dog who also blogs. Follow her at scvincent.com and on Twitter @SCVincent Find her books on Goodreads and follow her on Amazon worldwide to find out about new releases and offers. Email: findme@scvincent.com
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19 Responses to Hundred #writeinspiration

  1. Complete scene completely described. Really good!

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  2. So much there in so few words. Good one.

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  3. kirizar says:

    Fifty shades of Lorena Bobbit?

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  4. KL Caley says:

    Ooooh how intriguing! I don’t know if I dare say I know how she feels regarding the snoring – haha – even the dog snores in this house! Very creative Sue, loved it! KL 🙂

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  5. Ritu says:

    Oooh! A little chilling me thinks!!!

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  6. Um…wow. This is beautifully dark. I love it.

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  7. HaHA! I loved this Sue. Disillusioned and ready to kill him! 🙂

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  8. noelleg44 says:

    Wow, Sue! The mind of a killer!

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