Switch #writespiration

She looked at the cards in her hand, head down, buying time. What to do? Some you win, some you lose. Always the same dilemma. She lifted her eyes, meeting his eager gaze and pinning his attention as she switched the cards. How could she tell him that he would never see another dawn?

For Sacha’s 52 word challenge

About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent was a Yorkshire born writer, esoteric teacher and a Director of The Silent Eye. She was immersed in the Mysteries all her life. Sue maintained a popular blog and is co-author of The Mystical Hexagram with Dr G.M.Vasey. Sue lived in Buckinghamshire, having been stranded there due to an accident with a blindfold, a pin and a map. She had a lasting love-affair with the landscape of Albion, the hidden country of the heart. Sue  passed into spirit at the end of March 2021.
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15 Responses to Switch #writespiration

  1. Carl Bystrom says:

    This is very nice, but I have to admit that I secretly hate these super short ones because I am always left longing to know more! Sigh.

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  2. Wow. I didn’t expect that. Awesome.

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  3. Ritu says:

    Brilliantly done!

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  4. Ooooh, great story Sue. Very chilling.

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  5. Eliza Waters says:

    Love that punch at the end!

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