Switch #writespiration

She looked at the cards in her hand, head down, buying time. What to do? Some you win, some you lose. Always the same dilemma. She lifted her eyes, meeting his eager gaze and pinning his attention as she switched the cards. How could she tell him that he would never see another dawn?

For Sacha’s 52 word challenge

About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent is a Yorkshire-born writer and one of the Directors of The Silent Eye, a modern Mystery School. She has written a number of books, both alone and with Stuart France, exploring ancient myths, the mysterious landscape of Albion and the inner journey of the soul. She is owned by a small dog who also blogs. Follow her at scvincent.com and on Twitter @SCVincent Find her books on Goodreads and follow her on Amazon worldwide to find out about new releases and offers. Email: findme@scvincent.com
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15 Responses to Switch #writespiration

  1. Carl Bystrom says:

    This is very nice, but I have to admit that I secretly hate these super short ones because I am always left longing to know more! Sigh.

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  2. Wow. I didn’t expect that. Awesome.

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  3. Ritu says:

    Brilliantly done!

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  4. Ooooh, great story Sue. Very chilling.

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  5. Eliza Waters says:

    Love that punch at the end!

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