Emotion #writespiration

Posted on March 1, 2017 by Sue Vincent

Pallid hands grasping
Hot breath and a leering smile
Looming over me

Anticipation
In certain knowledge of pain
Rigid muscles locked

Silent screams muffled
Echoing through every nerve
As he advances

Unable to flee
Submission the only choice
I am powerless

Numb and reliving
A lifetime of emotion
In the dentist’s chair

For Sacha’s 52 word writing challenge… describe an emotion without naming it.

About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent was a Yorkshire born writer, esoteric teacher and a Director of The Silent Eye. She was immersed in the Mysteries all her life. Sue maintained a popular blog and is co-author of The Mystical Hexagram with Dr G.M.Vasey. Sue lived in Buckinghamshire, having been stranded there due to an accident with a blindfold, a pin and a map. She had a lasting love-affair with the landscape of Albion, the hidden country of the heart. Sue  passed into spirit at the end of March 2021.
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19 Responses to Emotion #writespiration

  1. mariasjostrand says:
    March 1, 2017 at 08:50

    God, I loved that plot twist! 😀

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  2. Ritu says:
    March 1, 2017 at 08:55

    Good one Sue. I’ve just penned mine!

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  4. Judy E Martin says:
    March 1, 2017 at 19:17

    Loved it Sue! I hate the dentist too!

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  5. willowdot21 says:
    March 1, 2017 at 21:44

    eeeeeeeeek I love it !

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  6. Sacha Black says:
    March 3, 2017 at 09:53

    What a brilliant twist at the end. LOVED this. I wasn’t sure where it was going and well didn’t expect that.

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