Emotion #writespiration

Pallid hands grasping
Hot breath and a leering smile
Looming over me

In certain knowledge of pain
Rigid muscles locked

Silent screams muffled
Echoing through every nerve
As he advances

Unable to flee
Submission the only choice
I am powerless

Numb and reliving
A lifetime of emotion
In the dentist’s chair

For Sacha’s 52 word writing challenge… describe an emotion without naming it.

About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent is a Yorkshire-born writer and one of the Directors of The Silent Eye, a modern Mystery School. She has written a number of books, both alone and with Stuart France, exploring ancient myths, the mysterious landscape of Albion and the inner journey of the soul. She is owned by a small dog who also blogs. Follow her at scvincent.com and on Twitter @SCVincent Find her books on Goodreads and follow her on Amazon worldwide to find out about new releases and offers. Email: findme@scvincent.com
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19 Responses to Emotion #writespiration

  1. God, I loved that plot twist! 😀

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Ritu says:

    Good one Sue. I’ve just penned mine!


  3. Loved it Sue! I hate the dentist too!


  4. willowdot21 says:

    eeeeeeeeek I love it !


  5. Sacha Black says:

    What a brilliant twist at the end. LOVED this. I wasn’t sure where it was going and well didn’t expect that.


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