Books at bedtime

BookI’ve had editing up to the eyeballs,
It’s no joke but it has to be done…
Though it’s getting a bit of a bugger,
Going cross-eyed at two books, not one.

‘Cause you know, all those odd extra spaces?
The odd comma, that colon or bracket?
It had got to the point by this evening
That my poor eyeballs just couldn’t hack it.

I am no longer seeing the typos,
As the words dance a jig on the screen
The whole thing is making me seasick
And I probably look a bit green.

So I’m bidding the keyboard Mañana
And I’m off without one backward look,
To do something much more relaxing…
I shall go and curl up with a book.

About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent was a Yorkshire born writer, esoteric teacher and a Director of The Silent Eye. She was immersed in the Mysteries all her life. Sue maintained a popular blog and is co-author of The Mystical Hexagram with Dr G.M.Vasey. Sue lived in Buckinghamshire, having been stranded there due to an accident with a blindfold, a pin and a map. She had a lasting love-affair with the landscape of Albion, the hidden country of the heart. Sue  passed into spirit at the end of March 2021.
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31 Responses to Books at bedtime

  1. Sadje says:

    Lol! Relax and have a good day.

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  2. Brilliant! I’m screen out too – made a list of non screen things to do. Like read a book, mow the lawn, write a letter etc Balance! Good luck with the editing…x

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  3. Ritu says:

    Chill out for a bit… Those characters will stay dancing until you rest your own eyes! Then they’ll still!

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  4. TanGental says:

    very wise Sue or you might rupture your semi-solon

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  5. jenanita01 says:

    Much as we would like to, we cannot edit for too long. Little and often, I’m afraid, is the only way to do it!

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  6. Wonderful written, Sue! I wish i could read “cross-eyed”.

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  7. Widdershins says:

    I completely understand your logic. 🙂

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  8. Adele Marie says:

    I know the feeling well, Sue. xxx

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  9. dgkaye says:

    Lol, fantastic, and I don’t blame you. Omg, I don’t know how you have the concentration these days. I have a first draft of a book done a few months ago and am dreading beginning revisions, even though it’s not like we have anywhere to go. LOL. Take your time, when you’re ready you will know. ❤

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  10. macjam47 says:

    Editing is so tedious it would make anyone’s eyeballs go wonky. A book is a much better alternative. Hope it was a good one. Hugs and stay safe.

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