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Gallant blush of dawn
Imprisoned by winter’s bars
Promise of rebirth
Time’s fleeting finality
Made a mockery by gold
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Hiabun for Colleen’s poetry challange
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Gallant blush of dawn
Imprisoned by winter’s bars
Promise of rebirth
Time’s fleeting finality
Made a mockery by gold
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A lovely poem
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Thanks, Sadje.
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A pleasure Sue
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Thought provoking beauty in your words, Sue
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Thank you.
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Beautiful Sue..xxx
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Thanks, Sally xx
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beautiful words, sue
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Thanks, Beth.
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Lovely writing
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Thanks 🙂
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Glorious 💜
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❤
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger and commented:
Love the last two lines!
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Thank you for sharing, Traci.
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You’re welcome, Sue!
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I love the layers of meaning in this spectacular Tanka, Sue. Amazing! ❤
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Thank you, Colleen. ❤
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Love this Sue, and that photo is awesome.
Pat
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Thank you, Pat. 🙂
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