Golden

Posted on November 28, 2019 by Sue Vincent

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Gallant blush of dawn

Imprisoned by winter’s bars

Promise of rebirth

Time’s fleeting finality

Made a mockery by gold

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Hiabun for Colleen’s poetry challange

 

About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent is a Yorkshire-born writer and one of the Directors of The Silent Eye, a modern Mystery School. She writes alone and with Stuart France, exploring ancient myths, the mysterious landscape of Albion and the inner journey of the soul. Find out more at France and Vincent. She is owned by a small dog who also blogs. Follow her at scvincent.com and on Twitter @SCVincent. Find her books on Goodreads and follow her on Amazon worldwide to find out about new releases and offers. Email: findme@scvincent.com.
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20 Responses to Golden

  1. Sadje says:
    November 28, 2019 at 06:38

    A lovely poem

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  2. EDC Writing/Believing Sight Unseen says:
    November 28, 2019 at 07:29

    Thought provoking beauty in your words, Sue

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  4. beth says:
    November 28, 2019 at 12:33

    beautiful words, sue

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  7. tracikenworth says:
    November 29, 2019 at 02:06

    Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger and commented:
    Love the last two lines!

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  8. Colleen M. Chesebro says:
    November 29, 2019 at 17:01

    I love the layers of meaning in this spectacular Tanka, Sue. Amazing! ❤

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  9. jazzytower says:
    November 30, 2019 at 16:21

    Love this Sue, and that photo is awesome.

    Pat

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