Knock, Knock #flashfiction

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“Knock, knock.”

“Who’s there?”

“Let me in, or you’re dead.”

“What? What did you say?”

“Knock, knock.”

“Who’s there?”

“Let me in, or you’re dead.”

“Look, I’m not playing this game. You’re scaring me and my little sister. My parents will be home soon so you better go, otherwise, Papa will punch you on the nose.”

“Knock, knock.”

“I told you, you’re scaring me. I’m not playing this game anymore.”

“Let me in, or you’re dead.”

“No! I’m not letting you in. Go away…PLEASE!”

For the next sixty-six seconds, there was nothing but total silence until, out of curiosity and as the clock struck six, Angela opened the door and peered out into the garden. Whoever it had been was gone and all seemed normal. That was until Angela began closing the door and noticed that the door knocker was missing.

“Knock, knock” came a voice from behind Angela, as…

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About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent is a Yorkshire-born writer and one of the Directors of The Silent Eye, a modern Mystery School. She has written a number of books, both alone and with Stuart France, exploring ancient myths, the mysterious landscape of Albion and the inner journey of the soul. She is owned by a small dog who also blogs. Follow her at and on Twitter @SCVincent Find her books on Goodreads and follow her on Amazon worldwide to find out about new releases and offers. Email:
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6 Responses to Knock, Knock #flashfiction

  1. Thanks for the inspiration, Sue. 💛


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