Flash fiction: Mélusine

Jane Dougherty's avatarJane Dougherty Writes

Thanks to Sue Vincent for inspiring this short story.

Daughters of the Mist

The lake is still now, and mist falls on the farther shore. The sun sets. Shadow fills this ruined cabin, roofed by the stars and the cloud, and I wait for the first ripples to appear on the lake water. I betrayed her once and she left me, but I can never leave her side, even though it may be death to linger here.

The last rays slide across the dark water where the stars are mirrored, so far away. The blood red light breaks into bars of dark gold as the surface is broken, ripples racing shoreward from an unseen point that gathers darkness about it like a cloak.

Mélusine.

I form the name, silently, so often murmured, but forbidden now. I step through the doorway into the light that lingers in the sky and the ripples buck and writhe…

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About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent was a Yorkshire born writer, esoteric teacher and a Director of The Silent Eye. She was immersed in the Mysteries all her life. Sue maintained a popular blog and is co-author of The Mystical Hexagram with Dr G.M.Vasey. Sue lived in Buckinghamshire, having been stranded there due to an accident with a blindfold, a pin and a map. She had a lasting love-affair with the landscape of Albion, the hidden country of the heart. Sue  passed into spirit at the end of March 2021.
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4 Responses to Flash fiction: Mélusine

  1. Thanks for reblogging, Sue 🙂

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  2. Morgan's avatar Morgan says:

    Outstanding!

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  3. reocochran's avatar reocochran says:

    I enjoyed this poetic and lovely short story and am glad Sue inspired Jane to write this! Heading off to read the ending!

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