Thanks to Sue Vincent for inspiring this short story.

The lake is still now, and mist falls on the farther shore. The sun sets. Shadow fills this ruined cabin, roofed by the stars and the cloud, and I wait for the first ripples to appear on the lake water. I betrayed her once and she left me, but I can never leave her side, even though it may be death to linger here.
The last rays slide across the dark water where the stars are mirrored, so far away. The blood red light breaks into bars of dark gold as the surface is broken, ripples racing shoreward from an unseen point that gathers darkness about it like a cloak.
Mélusine.
I form the name, silently, so often murmured, but forbidden now. I step through the doorway into the light that lingers in the sky and the ripples buck and writhe…
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Thanks for reblogging, Sue 🙂
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My pleasure, Jane 🙂
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Outstanding!
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I enjoyed this poetic and lovely short story and am glad Sue inspired Jane to write this! Heading off to read the ending!
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