(Haiku written as prompt for Colleen’s poetry challenge)
clouds cover the moon,
beyond dawn’s pale horizon
sun rises unseen
Source of hope obscured
Hidden by storm clouds rising
Still casting its light
(Haiku written as prompt for Colleen’s poetry challenge)
clouds cover the moon,
beyond dawn’s pale horizon
sun rises unseen
Source of hope obscured
Hidden by storm clouds rising
Still casting its light
This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
Beautiful words and photos!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thanks, Betty.
LikeLike
WELL-SAID!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks, Jonathan.
LikeLiked by 1 person
U.R. ALWAYS WELCOME, SUE!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
THIS MAKES OUR DAYS, AS WELL! HAPPY THANKSGIVING!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for reblogging, Jonathan.
LikeLiked by 1 person
ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT-! 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a fantastic photo.
LikeLiked by 2 people
All three from my doorstep 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lucky you.
LikeLike
🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
That’s a beautiful prompt by you, Sue and an equally beautiful response. Thanks for the prompt, beautiful pictures too. 🙂
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you, 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome, Sue. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think I need a doorstep like yours, Sue…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Possibly the best one I’ve had 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
That must make for better days!
LikeLike
It is rather nice to be able to sit warm on the sofa, watching through the glass doors 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Even better, Sue…
LikeLike
Especially on days like today 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Both are lovely, Sue.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Diana.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely haikus, Sue, with an undertone of melancholy.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Robbie.
LikeLike
Hope is still there and burns bright in the dawn of a firey sky. ❤
LikeLiked by 2 people
❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Those skies have a lot to say. (K)
LikeLiked by 1 person
They do…
LikeLiked by 1 person
A tonic, as always, Sue. Perfect words and pictures, and a ray of hope too. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dawn always brings hope 🙂
LikeLike
Beautiful theme prompt Sue, lovely pair of poems. 🙂 x
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Marje 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome Sue. x
LikeLiked by 1 person
The sun is the source of so much. Fantastic observations with hope.
LikeLiked by 1 person
We wouldn’t be here without it 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Pingback: TANKA TUESDAY POETRY CHALLENGE STARS | #ThemePrompt: | Word Craft ~ Prose & Poetry
Great post and beautiful photography…
LikeLike
Thank you.
LikeLike
Welcome
LikeLiked by 1 person
Pingback: Horizon #midnighthaiku | B +Ve !!