A soul laid open

Offered and shared in friendship

Journeys deep engraved

Mapping possibility

Accepted or held in trust


For Colleen’s Poetry Challenge


About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent is a Yorkshire-born writer and one of the Directors of The Silent Eye, a modern Mystery School. She writes alone and with Stuart France, exploring ancient myths, the mysterious landscape of Albion and the inner journey of the soul. Find out more at France and Vincent. She is owned by a small dog who also blogs. Follow her at and on Twitter @SCVincent. Find her books on Goodreads and follow her on Amazon worldwide to find out about new releases and offers. Email:
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38 Responses to Mapped

  1. Lokesh Umak says:

    Do you believe in palmistry?🤚

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Sadje says:

    Hidden in the lines of the hand!

    Liked by 2 people

  3. gdutta17 says:

    Beautiful words..sublime actually.
    On a lighter note…If i decide to court another woman, will borrow these lines from you. 😀


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  5. robertcday says:

    Funnily enough, these were my thoughts exactly this morning, Sue.
    Have a good one.


  6. willowdot21 says:

    This is so good Sue, so original and so true 💜


  7. kittysverses says:

    Profound lines, Sue. Loved your tanka. 🙂


  8. judeitakali says:

    Wow, that’s quite the image. And gorgeous writing too 💕


  9. Beautiful tanka, Sue. ❤


  10. dgkaye says:

    Loved this, and of course the palm sketch ❤


  11. Sue, this is such a fabulous tanka. The palm/soul map is stunning! ❤


  12. Great reminder that our fate is in our own hands… lovely response Sue..xx


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