
Image Credit: © Sally Cronin
Fettering freedom
The song of boundless oceans
Captured in a shell
Tides abandon their burden
Waves embrace will bring it home
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Image Credit: © Sally Cronin
Fettering freedom
The song of boundless oceans
Captured in a shell
Tides abandon their burden
Waves embrace will bring it home
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This tanka is beautiful, I loved the last two lines. Lovely, Sue. 🙂
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Thank you, Kitty.
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You are welcome, Sue. 🙂
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Beautifully done Sue 💜
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Thanks, Willow ❤
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💜
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Wonderful response to the image Sue.. loved it.xxx
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It is a gorgeous photo. The rocks of the cliffs look sculpted. Ireland? X
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Actually the Cardigan coast.. we stay at The Cliff Hotel at Gwbert the night before we catch the ferry back from the UK to Ireland.. lovely place. xx
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I’ll bear that in mind for future reference 😉 x
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Reblogged this on Anita Dawes & Jaye Marie ~ Authors.
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Wow this is so beautiful. An exceptional tanka Sue
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Thank you, Jude.
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My pleasure Sue
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A lovely poem, Sue
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Thank you, Diana.
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The ocean is full of gifts. (K)
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Always 🙂
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the ebb and flow of life…
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Indeed, Jim.
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I think you channeled the songs of the sea, Sue. This tanka is so lovely. ❤
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Thanks, Colleen ❤
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Sue, did you want to pick the theme for tomorrow’s challenge? I selected you last month:
https://colleenchesebro.com/2020/06/29/weekly-poetry-challenge-stars-theme-prompt-scvincent/. I need to set up the post, so please let me know. Thanks and hugs. ❤
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Emailed you, Colleen! x
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Yay! Thank you. ❤
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🙂 x
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