Lost in misty, moss-green silence
Seek her eyes in wild abandon
Midnight tresses bind you
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Huntress of the shadow land
Talon-sharp her laughter
Lost in misty, moss-green silence
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Underneath the dark cascade
Silken ripples drown you
Seek her eyes in wild abandon
*
Cold within the eagle’s eyrie
Velvet madness bleeds you dry
Midnight tresses bind you.
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Cascade poem, originally written for Jane Dougherty‘s Poetry Challenge.
haunting
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Absolutely beautiful, is that one of your paintings Sue 💜
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Thanks, Willow…. I wish, but no 🙂
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It’s lovely anyway.💜
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Wonderful Sue!
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Thanks, Di.
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Ooh! Beware of her. Nicely done.
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Thanks, Sadje.
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A pleasure.
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Wow, Sue, such vivid and haunting imagery. I wouldn’t want to meet her in a dark alley! This one feels as though there’s a story brewing somewhere… 🙂
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There are always stories lurking 😉
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🙂
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry by a talented writer.
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Amazing poetry Sue.
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Thank you, John.
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You are welcome Sue.
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THIS IS ONE POWERFUL POEM!
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Thank you 🙂
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
LOVE IN ROCKY HEIGHTS
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Thanks for sharing, Jonathan.
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This reminds me of Keats’s La belle dame sans merci. Haunting, indeed.
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Thank you, Audrey 🙂
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I’m not familiar with the cascade poetry form. I really like your poem and the cascading effect it achieves. I also really like the accompanying image.
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Thnk you, Liz… I have tothank Jane Dougherty for introducing me to that particular form.
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