Cold,
Distant,
Unearthly,
Inhuman song…
Stirring emotions
Only hearts understand.
Feel it… there is a yearning,
Calling us to new horizons,
Irresistible invitation
To step beyond, immersed in haunting song.
Heart to heart they sing, seeking compassion;
Borne across the ever-changing sea…
Wordless plea for understanding.
Plastic inhumanity
Takes and will not listen.
Wreaking destruction,
What will remain?
Just water
Empty
Cold
For Colleen’s poetry challenge.
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About Sue Vincent
Sue Vincent was a Yorkshire born writer, esoteric teacher and a Director of The Silent Eye. She was immersed in the Mysteries all her life. Sue maintained a popular blog and is co-author of The Mystical Hexagram with Dr G.M.Vasey. Sue lived in Buckinghamshire, having been stranded there due to an accident with a blindfold, a pin and a map. She had a lasting love-affair with the landscape of Albion, the hidden country of the heart. Sue passed into spirit at the end of March 2021.
I love that the prose form a wave. Nice one, Sue!
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Thank you, Susie.
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Lovely, Sue!
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Thanks, Jordis. x
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I love this poem, Sue. Amazing.
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Thank you, Robbie.
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Sue, I have absolute chills reading this fabulous double Etheree. Excellent message. ❤
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Thanks, Colleen. x
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Amazing write, Sue!! ❤
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Thanks, Dorinda. x
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You’re welcome 🙂
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🙂 x
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Very strong Sue and the arrangement of the words is just imagery at its finest
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Thank you, Roger.
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🌸 🌼 🌻 🌞
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Thank you for sharing, Jaye x
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Such a clever poem. Well done.
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Thanks, Tric.
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I’m liking this Etheree poetry form Sue and you did a fab job! ❤
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Thanks, Debby. I enjoyed working with this form. ❤
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‘plastic inhumanity’ …there you go, wordsmithing wonderfully again. 😀
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Chilling…an entire story in a few words. (K)
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Such beauty to be put at risk by greed… and we put ourselves at risk too by not caring as a species.
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We do. I wonder that so many can’t see it.
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I know…
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Hi Sue! I enjoyed your double inverted Etheree poem!
Stirring emotions
Only hearts understand.
Love, love, love these lines!
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Thanks, Vashti.
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