pre dawn 059

If I could dream a dawn
Into existence
It would wear your face
In its sleep.
If I could dream a morning
It would wake to your breath,
A pillowed silhouette against the dawn,
The space between filled with warmth
And the tenderness
Of tangled legs.
If I could dream a sunrise,
It would hear our voices, laughing,
Recreating ourselves
To match the perfection
Of golden light.
Why dream a morning?
All I need to do
Is open my eyes
And wake.

pre dawn 065

Linked to Open Link Night at dVerse

About Sue Vincent

Sue Vincent is a Yorkshire-born writer and one of the Directors of The Silent Eye, a modern Mystery School. She has written a number of books, both alone and with Stuart France, exploring ancient myths, the mysterious landscape of Albion and the inner journey of the soul. She is owned by a small dog who also blogs. Follow her at scvincent.com and on Twitter @SCVincent Find her books on Goodreads and follow her on Amazon worldwide to find out about new releases and offers. Email: findme@scvincent.com
This entry was posted in Poetry and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink.

68 Responses to Dreamer

  1. davidprosser says:

    That’s breathtaking Sue.
    xxx Massive Hugs xxx


  2. Bernadette says:

    So much love contained in your words.


  3. adeleulnais says:

    Beautiful, Sue. xx


  4. Éilis Niamh says:

    I love this! So beautiful.


  5. You do write such beautiful words, Sue.


  6. This is truly stunning, Sue. Brought tears to my eyes. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Erik says:

    Having gotten some tender glimpses into your life on the whole, this takes on a new layer of meaning still.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Rae Longest says:

    This is simply lovely in its simplicity: calming, inspiring and beautiful. Your poetry is so REAL.


  9. Pingback: Sunday Blog Share: Dreamer | Myths of the Mirror

  10. balroop2013 says:

    Profound, perfectly dreamy yet real! Sue you can create magic with your words!


  11. An absolutely dreamy poem. Romantic. Sweet. Sigh.


  12. Erika Beebe says:

    I enjoyed your poem so much. Wow!


  13. Such a beautiful piece, Sue. I found my way here via Diana. I’m now following your blog as well. Thank you for sharing such beautiful words. 🙂


  14. Beautiful, Sue. 🙂 — Suzanne


  15. jillys2016 says:

    The freshness of your phrasing is outstanding!


  16. I see and read this poem as a surrealism of poetic beauty wrapped in creative delight of metaphors. Amazing write. 🙂


  17. Love and dawn, two beautiful concepts. I love the way you wove them together.


  18. Frank Hubeny says:

    It is good to dream of having what one already has and all one needs to do is wake up.


  19. You left me quite breathless!❤️ This is beautiful!


  20. So enjoyed this poem of love and especially the ending, Sue. Hope to see more of you here at dVerse.


  21. Bev says:

    Sunrise and the reassurance of a new day and renewed love. Lovely,.


  22. Love the tenderness of this love… and the imagery.


  23. kim881 says:

    It’s a pleasure to see you at the dVerse Poets Pub, Sue! I hope you become a regular.
    Your poem is stunning, with its dreaminess and wistfulness, and written with love. I particular enjoyed the image of:
    ‘A pillowed silhouette against the dawn,
    The space between filled with warmth
    And the tenderness
    Of tangled legs’.
    And I love the ending! 😉


  24. Ayala says:

    Beautiful poem!


  25. So much you see in those skies and in “you”! You are blessed. Wonderful.


  26. annell4 says:

    Perhaps that is often the answer? “Open your eyes.”


  27. Bodhirose says:

    Yes, why dream it if you can just awaken and there it is but I suppose nice to have it in a dream as well. Just lovely. Thanks for sharing at dVerse!
    Gayle ~


  28. Imelda says:

    Beautiful piece. 🙂


  29. Beautiful. I always think of Zhuangzi when waking and dreaming are brought into play.

    “Now I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly, dreaming I am a man.”


  30. A lovely love poem.


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.